05 September 2009

Suki's new Shotgun

ISBN: 9780982468630

Followup to this, but from the draft of the book:

The couple is in the Mega Wal*Mart at Eglin Air Force Base, near Ft. Walton Beach, Florida in the early 2030s. We both know, you can't do this right now, just focus on the story. It is a 12 GA, that needs to be fixed in an edit.

“John, are these new Benelli’s as good as yours?”
“I can’t see how they can’t be. They have had an excellent reputation since forever.”
Suki asks to see the flat-black, left-handed Benelli semi-automatic with the latest four-inch chamber. John shows her how to hold it properly and comments that the barrel might be a little long for their purposes.
“Sir, we have every size barrel for those in stock and we can cut it back to the minimum length, if you wish.”
Suki, rather than John, replies, “Fourteen inch barrel, threaded for extensions and chokes, six inch barrel extension also threaded for chokes, full line of chokes, seven shell magazine extension and any recoil reducers that can be added please.”
John pays attention and does not detect her missing anything.
“Very well, Miss. Your identification and how are you paying?”
She gives the Gunsmith her Virginia driver’s license, contractor credentials, and Platinum card.
“Oh, one of you needs to have authorization to shop here, but you can pay for it, Miss.” After he verifies her age and returns her identification.
John laughs, “Some things don’t change. Forgot about that detail,” as he hands over his retiree identification card.
“Thank you Colonel Tagliaferro, be right back.”
The SPs monitor the security cameras as their charges shop and are waiting by the exit door as the couple emerges, helping them load the cargo area.
“Very nice scatter gun Doctor Suki, have you been shooting long?” One of the Sergeants asks.
“Nope, John is going to teach me while we are here, last time I shot one of these was never,” she giggles.
The female co-driver gives an astounded look, “Really? How did you know what to order? Sounds like a great home gun and great for the skeet range, even trap with a full choke, maybe a barrel extension.”
“Just from talking to John and some of my own research,” as she gives John a hug. John smiles as his girl makes him so proud again.
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I got my free Koran and Prayer Rug at G'itmo

Couldn't find my college football jersey so I am sporting my Rush Limbaugh Club G'itmo T-shirt while I sit at Starbucks and write Suki IV: Finally A Vacation today. Close enough to the right color orange.

04 September 2009

Suki gets all Multi-Lingual on a Stripper

I have permission to post something I got to help with in Suki IV: Finally A Vacation. ISBN: 9780982468630

The scene is just after John and Suki have arrived at Eglin Air Force Base, Florida, for their two week vacation. They are picking up a car from 'Cuda Mike, one of John's car restoration buddies, and Mike's girlfriend Honey.


John glances over at Suki and Honey, Suki looks uncomfortable.

“Suki, you really need to get off base and hang out with me and my friends. They get all the latest ‘candy,’ really generous foreigners. Can even get you some sets as a guest entertainer too!”
('Honey' informs Suki)

Suki is already put off by the girl’s skin tight mid-drift tank top, bright orange electrochromic short-shorts and 6” heel sandals with straps crisscrossing all the way to her knees. Visible tattoos everyplace. She is constantly touching Suki’s back and arms.

“Honey, no offense, but we are here on vacation and I already have plenty of work. I am not an entertainer, except in private for John of course and we don’t do any recreational drugs at all. We are here to spend a lot of time with each other on the shooting and archery ranges.”

“Come on Suki, just because we are with old guys doesn’t mean we have to be old women. I am sure if you tried some of the new stuff you would love it and my friends would love you. They are very generous, you could never imagine.”

“Thanks, I’ll tell my mom. I just love John, that’s enough for me and I don’t see him as old at all.”

“Suki, it will be a blast, not like biometrics nerdy stuff . . .”

“NO, NãO, NON, NEE, NEIN, NYE, NYET, LAA*, pick a fucking language and process it,” Suki says with a harsh loud whisper and Suki works her way back to the men. “Mike, can I look at the engine on this beautiful car?”

“Of course! John, want to help her with the hood?”

“Suki, you are familiar with those, just like dad’s Charger?”

Before John finishes she has the pins out of the front of the hood, careful not to rub the paint, and the latch released. “Oh my! This looks like one they had on display at the dealership I worked at in Charlottesville during college!”

“They had a medical school in Charlottesville back then?” Honey queries, still uncomfortably close to Suki.“Um, I was never in medical school. UVA is where I got my Bachelor’s in Mathematics. My PhD is in Robotics. Mike, this looks perfect!"


*All of those words mean no in different languages. No: English, Spanish, Italian (others); Não: Portuguese; Non: French; Nee: Afrikaans, Dutch; Nein: German; Nye: Belarusian; Nyet: Russian; Laa: Arabic.

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Finishing Suki IV this Weekend

That's the plan anyway. Going to try to finish book four this weekend.

At this point, coalition troops have met all of their major objectives and the forst rotation is beginning.

John and Suki get to actually "vacation" on their vacation their second week at Eglin AFB. They have lots of good, healthy, fun lovemaking sessions just about anyplace they have enough privacy for that. Have taken the advice of my prime proofreader, Danielle, and the sessions are much more detailed on the romantic, sensual side. Like with Suki III, but expanded.

Suki is approaching expert level with Skeet and Trap.

John is doing very well with archery under Suki's coaching.

Threats against the couple have been eliminated, at least the known ones have been.

Suki's lingering problems seem to be extinct.

Tag can finally get word to Samantha that he is fine and safe.

8,000 words to go to wrap this up.

ISBN: 9780982468630

01 September 2009

Amy Alkon Praises The Wal*Mart!

Welcome To The "Art Farms"

If I am reading all that right, NPR was on the good side.

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Since John is too busy to post right now

Suki IV update: 3/4 of draft finished and sticking very close to outline. The only help I have been is in proofing and John catches most everything I find quicker than me. Danielle should be giving him feedback on the slow parts that I suck at fixing.

My opinion, the war with Iran story is really kicking ass and one of John's Special Forces Command Sergeant Major buddies at work said his dialogue between an IDF General, US Jag (Tag), the JAG's defense consultant father (John) and Suki, also consulting, read like reality. The advanced communications reads like it should for 20 - 25 years from now too.

The sex scenes are good, more mild than in the previous books, but nice and spicy for the healthy relationship that the couple has developed.

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31 August 2009

Thank you Kindle Customers!

Thank you Kindle Customers!

Kindle sales almost made the condo fees this month, which is AWESOME! Thank you!