Showing posts with label Suki II. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Suki II. Show all posts

15 July 2010

Over 3,000 reads of Suki II

Suki II: Sunshine Returns, over 3,000 reads as of this post. Free download at Scribd.Com
 
 
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25 May 2010

Impressed with Scribd: Suki II

Suki II: Sunshine Returns was posted as a free read on Scribd.com about 36 hours ago and has over 640 reads already.  Over 500 in the first 24 hours, over 900 in the first 48.  Much more than any other outlet I have used since publication. Peek at the rest of both series here.
 
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14 February 2010

Suki Series Paperbacks Now Available from Amazon

Amazon Books has the Suki Series available in paperback now.  All four from the origonal series: Siki I, Suki II: Sunshine Returns, Suki III: Never Let Us End, Suki IV: Finally A Vacation (War With Iran), plus Suki V: The Collection all four of the series books in one volume.

John and Suki: Vacation Fun by Sarah and Suki: Settling the Score are available together in a one volume paperback at the links too.

I have everything listed on the Order Page: Create Space links, Amazon Book links, Amazon Kindle links, PDF links.

Suki Series Background
Suki Series Tech
Order the paperback edition of Suki V: The Collection
Browse the series on Google:
Suki I, Suki II, Suki III, Suki IV, Suki V
Fan Fiction: John and Suki: Vacation Fun





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06 January 2010

Psychic: DC Expanding Smoking Ban

In the Suki Series, I had the idea that 20+ years in the future the DC smoking laws might be a little more strict.  The DC Council does not dissappoint.  Just caught this today.

The D.C. Council voted unanimously Tuesday to enact far-reaching proposals to curtail smoking by giving store owners a tool to prevent smoking on public sidewalks and by assessing new penalties on anyone younger than 18 who possesses tobacco products.

The bill, part of a coordinated campaign to reduce tobacco use in the District, also requires store owners to ask for identification from anyone buying cigarettes who looks 27 or younger, places new restrictions on cigarette-vending machines and outlaws the sale of "blunt wraps."
Store owners will be able to ban smoking within 25' of their doorways.  In the books, I have Suki getting a smoking and open flame ticket on the National Mall, because she was not in a designated smoking area, i.e., a smoking pit full of rude men and the women who enjoy them.

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Order the paperback edition of Suki V: The Collection

Browse the series on Google:
Suki I, Suki II, Suki III, Suki IV, Suki V
Fan Fiction: John and Suki: Vacation Fun


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03 January 2010

Happy New Year! Did you get a Kindle?


Happy New Year World!

Did you get a Kindle?  If you did why don't you browse some of the books I helped John with :)

Didn't get a Kindle? Get the reader for your PC, iPhone or iPod Touch and browse with that! The Google Books preview links are at the bottom of this post too.


Suki I, the story of how Suki found John and they became an item.  This one is mainly about Suki, her mother and friends, who all help Suki land the man of her dreams.

Set in Arlington, Virginia in the early 2030's (May of a year not revealed) with the most interesting gadgets, communication and toys the near future might bring.  As John says, "No stupid flying cars in my books!  Just realistic cool toys."

Most recreational drugs are legal and smoking in bars is legal in VA too.  They are Libertarians living in a county that is slowly catching up to their political tastes.  Washington, DC is right across the river and even more of a mess than earlier in the century.

Their friends don't know anybody else who wants a marriage without a marriage license, nor anybody else seeking a truly monogamous relationship, other than Suki and John.

Oh, the fashions!  Electrochromic polymer dresses and boots, lovely silks, leather and shoes, shoes, shoes!  Boots too.  Amazing varieties of gourmet food are plentyful.  Lab grown Kobe beef, genetically modified tomatoes, almost anything you can think of today is available in their world.  Muscle cars and trucks for the guys to read about, plus the great sex life Suki and John have for everybody to enjoy.


Suki II: Sunshine Returns, Suki's troubled past comes back to haunt them both.  It begins where Suki I ended, in June of the same year, and ends in December, with a delay in John's birthday because of a crisis.  Suki thinks her past may destroy the relationship!  Bonus, Samantha meets John's son Tag!  Much more about Tag and Samantha is told and more of Suki's history is revealed.  Sunshine drugs and attacks Suki, but John saves her in a unique way.

Ever wonder what a shotgun lesbian wedding would be like in a future where marriage and divorce can be filed electronically?  A peek into that world is revealed in Suki II.  Autonomous cargo planes, greatly expanded communications networks, automated home cleaning, a beautiful limo and more exquisite leather fashions for private as well as public wear.

Government healthcare?  Not for them.  They have private-practice doctors and all of their records are on pulp, rather than on K-Net.


Suki III: Never Let Us End, an ex-girlfriend of John's, Nancy, creates terrible problems for the couple and John is hospitalized for a week.

It begins in December, during John's birthday party, and ends in January, picking up where Suki II ended.

Nancy forces Suki to hypnotize John and makes Suki do awful things under the influence of a powerful mediction.  Suki has to defend John from three attackers!  Suki, her mother, Jung, along with their doctors bring John back to health, in a private hospital.  Suki becomes closer friends with John's best friend, Jackie, and they prepare for their first vacation in years.

The 1960 Polara custom limo plays a starring role.  More of John's past is revealed.  More interesting gadgets too, for inside and outside the bedroom.  One of my favorite parts, Suki has a full length baby seal fur coat (lab grown clone fur).


Suki IV: Finally a Vacation (War With Iran), the couple finally gets a vacation and chooses a safe place, Eglin Air Force Base, Florida.  It begins where Suki III ends, in January and continues through Valentine's Day.  Just when they think they can relax, the government needs them to help as consultants to defeat Iran in the surprise attack lead by Israel.  Tag is already in Iran as a liaison to the Israeli Defense Forces.

Suki buys her first shotgun and John teaches her how to shoot Trap and Skeet.

Ever wonder what you would do if you were locked in a Secure Compartmentalized Information Facility (SCIF), 12 hours per day, with the love of your life?  Take a peek in Suki IV.


Suki V: The Collection, is all four of the books listed above edited into one.  Slightly cheaper than getting all four separately too!  John does note where each of the origional books begins, but it is edited to flow like one novel, with redundant passages edited.

Suki V: The Collection is now available in paperback.  Holiday discount code for $10 off the paperback edition is  GHXYSXR5, only from CreateSpace.com.  Sorry, still $1 more than the Kindle edition.  This discount expires at the end of 2009.








Also on Kindle, Sarah wrote a fan fiction story off of the series: John and Suki: Vacation Fun.  The couple is kidnapped in Florida by a brutal pair who want to sell the knowledge John and Suki have to the Iranians, Russians and Venezuelans.  The couple's minds are not the only thing they are interested in.  John and Suki are both trained to obey without question or hesitation.  Suki is trained to kill with a unique weapon!


Li'l ol' me wrote a story following on Sarah's story, Suki: Settling the Score.  After being rescued, John and Suki are finally released from their month-long US government debriefing, but they still have problems.  Severe behavior problems, continuing to act as they were trained by Mike and Honey, their kidnappers in Sarah's story.  They need help, but Suki is slow to agree to it until John exercises his full dominance over her, after they have both done things that would normally end their relationship.

The baby seal fur coat reappears in a totally different setting than one would expect.  Plus some interesting disguise techniques, like contacts with view screens and data, natural skin feel masks, body makeup and instantaneous hair changing products.

Also, John and Suki finally agree to get pets, a black kitten and a grey kitten, one for each home: Dark Helmet and Smoke.


Happy New Year!

Update: New Series, Suki With A Twist


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29 September 2009

Gogs

John's "gog" idea from his books is now patented by Apple (hat tip to Gawker):


STEVE JOBS

Apple Granted Patent on iGlasses

Apple today received a patent on a head-mounted laser video display. Now that the three-year old application has finally been approved, Steve Jobs can put these babies through his grueling design process and hopefully pretty them up a bit.
Apple's innovation over previous head mounted displays is, in part, to separate the laser engine from the headgear, stowing the engine in a separate unit connected to the frames via fiber optic cable. Such an "iGlasses" setup, as our tipster calls it, would allow a more immersive television, gaming or conferencing experience when using, say, an iPhone. Or you could just walk around pretending to be a commando from the future, with frickin' laser breams attached to your head.
It's not clear whether Jobs will ever turn this officially-designated innovation into a product; his company boasts an impressive cash hoard with which it funds more research than it can use. Many of the patents from Apple's seemingly endless stream are never heard from again. The obsessive CEO remains, by all accounts, infatuated with his forthcoming tablet product at the moment, so we're not counting on being able to buy iGlasses anytime soon. But simply by putting the patent into the trophy case, Apple adds a little something to its mystique among its growing base of fans, the press included.
The first page of the patent is below, along with one drawing; we've archived the full filing here. AppleInsider summarized the application back in April.



Click here to find out more!

29 August 2009

Suki Series on Google Books

All three Suki books can be browsed on Google Books. Suki II is fully readable and downloadable there. Suki I and Suki III are 30% browsable.

Links at the Project Site.

Suki IV is about 50% complete. The coalition is just now crossing the Iranian border and most of the Iranian civilian leadership has been captured or killed.

16 August 2009

New Suki Project Website

Just the books.
http://sites.google.com/site/sukiprojectsite/

Since http://www.sukisite.com/ ended up being the background of global society in Suki's time and world, I decided to try a cleaner, neater approach.

The new site is the books, ordering information, descriptions and will have links to the character bios. Cover art for all of the books will be posted there as it is completed.

13 August 2009

Suki's Diagnosis

A Lieutenant Colonel smoking buddy of mine did an informal diagnosis of Suki, the fictional character in my book series. Cool stuff. He did it by reading a little of the books, from how I described the character and the back story, other elements of the character that are not spelled out in the books. Suki is recovering from Borderline Personality Disorder (BPD).

By the way, that is another reason why I would not be involved with Suki if she were a real person. I did not know what it was called, but I know the signs and I don't hang around women like that long. I had a "fixer-upper" who was well over the 'borderline,' for about five years. Jeff recommends the book I Hate You, Don't Leave Me for people, like me, who want to be able to identify people like this and avoid them a bit quicker. Also for people who know someone with BPD to learn how to help them.

Anyway, according to Jeff, the disorder is manageable, but not truly curable. The cool thing about writing future fiction, I can make it curable and Suki is pretty much done with it by the end of Suki III.

In the character Suki's case, she has been getting very good treatment for her "personality flaws" for several years before meeting John. Instead of blaming others, or "bad luck" for the drama in her life, she now accepts the blame for her actions. Usually she shoulders too much of the blame, and has to work on that. She finally stops trying to manipulate John's feelings near the end of Suki III, after John finally learns how to properly correct her in Suki II.

I really did not know I was writing a near textbook case and the character became that way through an odd series of events. I have written about some of this before on this blog and on the website. I began with the characters John and Suki being very close to the same age. Then I was advised to make Suki younger to appeal to more people, so her mother Jung became the character I would be most attracted to if she were real and that is still true.

Next, with the help of my blogger buddy, who writes here under the Suki handle, we gave Suki some appealing qualities, but a too perfect character is not truly appealing. So she had to have some unappealing qualities and the things that typically drive me away from some of the women I have been out with came flowing in. I used to assign those traits to immaturity that can appear in any person of any age, but I know a little more now.

When Suki and John meet, in Suki I, she still has an impulsiveness when she is not around her mother or her best friends. She knows her best friends do not tolerate that, so she never behaves that way around them. Her mother and therapist are always quick to correct her about any hint of impulsiveness they detect. Her best friends are her best friends because they are the type of people her therapist told her to seek out for her development.

Items that match the symptoms or events for BPD:

Traumatic experience in her youth: Father died when she was 10, body never recovered from airliner crash in the Pacific.

Recreational drug abuse for a period longer that six months.

Risky/deviant sexual behavior for longer than six months.

Impulsive decisions that resulted in "life wrecking" dramatic results.

Former denial of her actions resulting in dramatic, negative events.

Manipulative behavior.

Several other things, brings her over 6/10 of positive hits on symptoms/signs.

By the time of Suki III, like I stated above, Suki has developed into a mature, thoughtful woman. She and John are an inseparable couple and she gets to prove herself from the middle of the book to the end. These changes make her character a lot more fun to write, much more positive.

As soon as the beta readers are done, Suki III: Never Let Us End will be ready for purchase.






31 July 2009

Great Quotes from Strange Dates

Flight Attendant (on weekend 1): "It's cool you own guns. I would like to learn how to work a gun."

Same Flight Attendant (on weekend 2): "What? You have guns and you keep them in your house?"

Me: "Where the hell do you want me to keep them? The back of my Jeep in the parking garage?"

In Suki II: Sunshine Returns I have Patricia using that phrasing while talking to Suki:



“Trish, no, please, please! Don’t leave me! I need someone to hold me until this shit wears off! Please don’t rape me, just hold me?”

Trish thinks for a moment, yes, good idea . . . “Suki, I have to leave you here so I can go check the rest of the house. Good thing you taught me how to work a gun. It’s in your purse? What about the shotguns?”

“Oh, thank you,” Suki sobs, yes it is in my purse, safety is off, just point and shoot. Not sure if she did anything to the shotguns, the bottom one in the rack is loaded. There is another one in the foyer closet too.”

“Good girl, here is a big hug,” as she hugs and kisses Suki again, “need to leave you restrained baby, um . . . so you don’t hurt yourself.”
***************
Soon to be waitress: "I need to tell you something. The CIA put a chip in my ankle and it records everything I do."

Me: "Might not want to mention that on the interview I hooked you up with for this week."


**************
Me: "Does every single person in your apartment complex smoke pot? The courtyard was a giant pot cloud."

Peruvian lawyer: "Pot? What is pot?"

Me: "Marijuana"

Peruvian lawyer: "Marijuana? Get me some!"

Me: "Ugh."

**************

Date in Starbuck's after seeing Suki's profile: "Oh, the aroma of unground coffee beans, it is so different than after they are ground."

Me: "Yea, I guess so."

Date: "And the aroma of the chocolate before they mix it into mocha, it is delicious. My friends can't believe what a great sense of smell I have."

Me: "Yea, uh huh." Thinking someone has been lifting character traits from Suki.

As we step outside, I light a cigarette.

Date: "What are you doing?"

Me: "Lighting a cigarette."

Date: "I didn't know you smoked."

Me: "Must not be a problm if you couldn't smell it on me with that bionic nose."

***************

Me to a date I was taking to the Pentagon for lunch: "You might need three IDs tomorrow, will check."

Date : "I have plenty of I D just have a couple of different names on them.
That doesn't sound good does it?"

More on her here. Look for mine and Suki's handles in the comments. Even more here, here, and here.

***************

Peruvian lawyer (same one as above): "I need to dance, I must dance, ask manager to play dance music!"

Me: "I don't think they do dance music here, we need to get back to the Jeep anyway, the garage closes soon."

Peruvian lawyer: "My feets, they hurt, I cannot walk to garage. Come pick me up."

Me: "No, it is two blocks away and we will walk together I am not coming to pick you up."

Walking to garage, Peruvian lawyer: "Dance music! Let's dance."

Me: "Go wherever you want I am going home."

**************

More to come, I am sure.

04 July 2009

Thank G_d there is wind tonight!

Blogging as I watch the DC fireworks from the steps of the Pentagon, Corridor Seven.
Last year the air was so still the smoke obscured everything in short order. Very nice viewing tonight.

Suki III is coming along, about 20 pages right now, 380 to go and hope to be done with the first draft by go-to-work time on Tuesday.

The secretary of Suki's therapist happens to be an ex-girlfriend of John's, who is working herself into a jealous rage about John being engaged to Suki, right after John's delayed birthday party.

25 June 2009

Suki II ASIN: B002EL4EAK

Suki,
Thank you for handling the announcement while I got some rest and welcome back!
The Kindle version is live now, ASIN: B002EL4EAK, however Amazon's minimum price is $1, so that is the toll for the Kindle folks.

All,
Consider this version a pre-release, since I do have a couple of tweaks I think I need to make. May be able to save them for the next book, where something from John's past threatens the relationship.

This book picks up around the same place that Suki I ends.

I have never seen a lesbian shotgun wedding described anyplace before, so I hope my version sounds good.

Again, this is fiction. The only "real" person in it is "Big D", at his request and he has no lines, just a mention.

24 June 2009

I will do the honors

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Okay, maybe a little autobiographical

Suki II: Sunshine Returns is essentially complete now. Will probably be available for a free download soon too.

It ends with an opportunity for me to do a hint of autobiographical stuff. The character is similar to someone I knew, but not the same, and she goes off into territory that I don't think the woman I knew would go.

16 June 2009

My books are NOT Autobiographical

Sorry to break it to any of the literalistic folk out there, but look elsewhere for literal. I do not write literal/autobiographical books. I write fiction that nobody seems to reed read.

Sex scenes are fantasies that I like as fantasy, but not interested in a lot of it in reality.

Girl on girl? Love it, when I don't know the women and especially when neither of them is someone I am involved with.

Fast romances? They belong in books. In real, the last several exclusive relationships I have been in were never stated, we just started doing that.

Bondage? I like it but you will not know what I like in real from reading my books. You need to interact with me in real and pay attention.

The characters? The ones with the most lines are probably not my favorites. They have the most lines because they are easy to write lines for. They may also be the main characters, who have qualities that make them interesting, but not exactly interesting to me.

If anybody thinks Suki is my "ideal" then they have not really gotten to know me. That character is made that way to be interesting to many people. I am not "many people." I like certain things, that I do not put into main characters. Suki commits a complete deal-breaker to me in Suki I, but John is okay with it. Know why? They are made up characters in a made up story.

I would never get near a person like Suki*, if she were real, but I am sure many other people would. That is the idea. If I write the perfect woman for me, not many people would be interested in her besides me and a few others.

Of course there are similar things to me, or things I wish were me. John reacts to a lot of things the same way that I do or the way I would like to, but the character is doing those things in the context of the scene I have written and a lot of those are situations that I would never be in.

In Suki II: Sunshine Returns, John is just like me when Suki has to reveal her past. Actually, I wrote him doing a better job than me, but that is a lot easier in a novel than in real life. Suki finally has to reveal bad things from her past to John and she thinks he might not accept her past. He makes it easier for her. He reminds her again that if it is in the past it really does not matter what it was, as long as she has changed and wants to be the new person that she is. Well, something like that. I have not actually written that part yet, but that is the general way it will go.

Suki's fear is rooted in her past too. She not really afraid of failing, she is afraid of not getting her way. Although she has grown out of this and her therapist identified it early and helps her with it, the problem resurfaces. I suppose I could research this and use some technical terms for it, but to me it just reminds me of the childish behavior in adults that annoys me. To me, that is an appealing quality that I gave the character, but not enough to overcome the other things that she does.

*I am in my late 40s, not interested in anybody younger than me. Hypnotizing me without my approval is a total deal breaker.

12 June 2009

Suki II info

The direction I am going, for now, is Sunshine returns, a nemesis from Suki's past, to put the couple into government approved financial bondage.

Suki and John do not want to be married by the government, but they do want to be exclusive.  Sunshine takes advantage of that, and a few other things, to make both Suki and John her financial slaves through the help of the domestic court system.

John's wages are shared to Sunshine's conspirator.

09 June 2009

Suki II started

I have started writing Suki II: Sunshine Returns.

Really, never, ever, am I telling any woman I am going to be out with about the details of this one.  I don't want to end up being drugged, beaten and forced to surrender my "seed" for genetically natural children, whom I will never meet nor to have me and her be forced to bear genetically unmodified children with "strong genes" to be sold by her ex-lover.  Three women in a row who had too much info on Suki I seemed to think it was a dating guide for me and not FREAKING FICTION.

It begins pretty rough, but not brutal.  Graphic, but not obscene to any Crucible players.  First feedback is that it certainly does not drag.